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Kia ora Vanshaj, Good effort in your poem. I like how you have used an appropriate image. I also like the descriptive language you used like "water splashing in the wind". Did you use a dictionary to help you with some of the tricky words in here? - Miss Laxa
Yes I did miss laxa
Hi VanshajI love the Autumn colours and the descriptive words in the poem. What is your favourite season and why?
Hi Vanshaj,This is an amazing poem! I love background colour it really matches to your theme, Autumn Anywayy god job, Byee
Kia ora Vanshaj,
ReplyDeleteGood effort in your poem. I like how you have used an appropriate image. I also like the descriptive language you used like "water splashing in the wind". Did you use a dictionary to help you with some of the tricky words in here?
- Miss Laxa
Yes I did miss laxa
DeleteHi Vanshaj
ReplyDeleteI love the Autumn colours and the descriptive words in the poem. What is your favourite season and why?
Hi Vanshaj,
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing poem! I love background colour it really matches to your theme, Autumn Anywayy god job, Byee